Thursday, September 9, 2010

Well Spent

Waiting
for meaning
and gleaning
no meaning;

creating,
debating,
and hating:
Waiting

thinking and reading
and being misleading;
breeding,
receding
despite special pleading;

deflated,
sedated,
and hated:
Waited

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  2. (sorry for the deleted comment, misspellings above!)

    I really enjoyed this one, the theme coupled with the internal rhyme really had a great movement and flow. Thanks for sharing!

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